Sharp
fresh
cold.
A shimmer of night.
Black
dark
frozen.
Twelve.
The middle.
The center.
A line.
Circling.
Spiral.
Straight.
Curved.
A shimmer.
The shine.
The dark.
The light.
Darker...
darker...
darker...
Different.
Just in case anyone is wondering, when ever I write a poem, the title of it is always the post title.
And now, poetry commentary...
I KNOW it doesn't make any sense! And I KNOW the patterns of this one are off. I just kind of like it. But, really, don't ask.
I just felt like writing something off. And I just think this one works for the vampire change. My version, anyway.
And no, they don't sparkle.
My vampires:
YES-
drink blood, any kind.
garlic affects them.
Well, anyway...
Garlic works, they don't like it. Can eat and get energy from human food. But it tastes pretty nasty. Cold, hard. Can go out in sun, don't burn. DO NOT SPARKLE! Don't sleep. They point and laugh at crosses. Drink any kind of blood.
Pretty much it for now.
So not much happened at school today, but that's ok.
Cheerio, peeps!
P.S. SPRING!!!!!!!!!!! <3
P.P.S. I am now completely in love with Death Note. I read 2 and 3 in two days. Now I'm waiting for 4, 5, and 6 to get to the library.
P.P.P.S. I REALLY hope I got into the play! (It's a Shakespeare play, over the summer.)
I really like your poem! :]
ReplyDeleteI hope you get the part!
long conversation flashback to when we were discousing Nacht and his "prank call"
ReplyDeleteVampier: Claudaria, just point and laugh, point and laugh.
Claudaria: will do. for once you had a good idea dad. oh, scary.... you dont have good ideas!!!!
Haha. I think I remember that.
ReplyDeleteafter the um... bubble gum incident... he was mean!!!!!
ReplyDeleteYes he was!
ReplyDeleteNice poem! I love spring too. And I'm also in a Shakespearian play! I'll put it on my blog.
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