you whisper the truth.
At dusk you sleep,
at dawn you rise.
In day you ponder,
in night you play.
For me you breath,
for you you die.
As a ghost you return,
as a shadow you lied.
And now,
my friend,
my comrade-in-arms,
to you I say,
Good-bye.
Interesting poem. Just some more randomness. It's actually decent. Definitely getting better...
Cheerio, peeps.
P.S. I need to decide the name. My Comrade-In-Arms, or Contradiction, as I originally meant it to be titled.
Wow! You guys do a lot of showings. We only do two at my school.
ReplyDeleteso awesome! i came up with another one yesterday during class but it was just way too terrible to save so it went on a little one way trip to the grabagio!
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