Tuesday 12 January 2010

More poems

I will find you,
you must let me go.
I will find you,
And I'll make it known.

I will be there,
even though it pains.
I will be there,
please don't make it rain.

I must leave,
you can't stop me.
I must leave,
it's the only thing that can be.

I will return,
through the haze.
I will return,
through your maze.



yah, i sorta got bored in math class and was letting my mind wander when out of nowhere BAM!!! it just came into my head, so I wrote it down.

3 comments:

  1. I think on the second part, instead of
    Please don't make it rain
    it should be
    Please don't bring the rains.

    Just a suggestion.

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  2. well, it's sorta like me talking to another person and it's sorta like "please don't make this any more difficult than it has to be." so don't me it rain like "just let me go, without a fuss."

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  3. uh... make it rain... not me it rain.... hehehehe... im so good at spelling....

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